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            <title>Who Are You And What Do You Want? </title>
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<p><font style="FONT-SIZE: 0.8em" size="2">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Image Source: Flickr. </font><a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/cubagallery/3617924055/"><font style="FONT-SIZE: 0.64em" size="2">Crystal Ball/Hands/Person</font></a><font style="FONT-SIZE: 0.8em" size="2">.</font> </p>
<p><strong>Personal mission statements </strong>are a way to begin answering those questions. Personal mission statements help us tell others about who we are, clarify goals and chart a course of action (at least for now!). </p>
<p><big><font style="FONT-SIZE: 1em"><strong>Do You Know These Corporate Mission Statements?</strong></font></big></p>
<p><big><font style="FONT-SIZE: 0.8em">Corporations use mission statements all the time.&nbsp; Mission statements are one way businesses can separate themselves as unique.</font></big></p>
<p><big><font style="FONT-SIZE: 0.8em">Here are some mission statements for some very familiar businesses:</font></big></p>
<p><big><font style="FONT-SIZE: 0.8em"><em><a href="http://www.personal.psu.edu/lrm155/blogs/technical_writing/assets_c/2011/11/Coca-cola-thumb-200x200-257392.jpg"><img style="MARGIN: 0px 0px 20px 20px; FLOAT: right" class="mt-image-right" alt="Thumbnail image for Coca-cola.jpg" src="http://www.personal.psu.edu/lrm155/blogs/technical_writing/assets_c/2011/11/Coca-cola-thumb-200x200-257392-thumb-200x200-257393.jpg" height="200" width="200" /></a></em></font></big></p>
<p><big><font style="FONT-SIZE: 1em"><em>To refresh the world...</em></font></big></p>
<p><big><font style="FONT-SIZE: 1em"><em>To inspire moments of optimism and happiness...</em></font></big></p>
<p><big><font style="FONT-SIZE: 0.8em"><em><a href="http://www.personal.psu.edu/lrm155/blogs/technical_writing/Coca-cola.jpg"></a><font style="FONT-SIZE: 1.25em">To create value and make a difference</font></em></font></big></p>
<p><big><font style="FONT-SIZE: 1em"><em>To bring to the world a portfolio of quality beverage brands that anticipate and satisfy people's desires and needs.</em></font></big></p>
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<p><big><font style="FONT-SIZE: 0.8em"><a href="http://www.personal.psu.edu/lrm155/blogs/technical_writing/starbucks-coffee-cup.jpg"><img style="MARGIN: 0px 20px 20px 0px; FLOAT: left" class="mt-image-left" alt="starbucks-coffee-cup.jpg" src="http://www.personal.psu.edu/lrm155/blogs/technical_writing/assets_c/2011/11/starbucks-coffee-cup-thumb-200x264-257395.jpg" height="264" width="200" /></a></font></big></p>
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<p><big><font style="FONT-SIZE: 1em"><em>When our customers feel this sense of belonging, our stores become a haven, a break from the worries outside, a place where you can meet with friends.&nbsp; </em></font></big></p>
<p><big><font style="FONT-SIZE: 1em"><em>It's about enjoyment at the speed of life - sometimes slow and savored, sometimes faster.&nbsp; </em></font></big></p>
<p><big><font style="FONT-SIZE: 1em"><em>Always full of humanity. </em></font></big></p>
<p><big><font style="FONT-SIZE: 1em"><strong><em></em></strong></font></big>&nbsp;</p>
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<p><big><font style="FONT-SIZE: 1em"><strong>How Do I Write My Own Mission Statement?</strong></font></big></p>
<p><big><font style="FONT-SIZE: 0.8em">What does it mean to write a personal mission statement?&nbsp; According to Ronald S. Hanson in The <a href="http://www.quintcareers.com/creating_personal_mission_statements.html">Five Step Plan for Creating Personal Mission Statements</a>:</font></big></p>
<p><big><font style="FONT-SIZE: 0.8em"><em><strong>"Writing a personal mission statement offers the opportunity to establish what's important and perhaps make a decision to stick to it before we even start a career." </strong></em></font></big></p>
<p><big><font style="FONT-SIZE: 0.8em">Steven Covey (in <u>First Things First</u>) refers to developing a mission statement as<em> <strong>"connecting with your own unique purpose and the profound satisfaction that comes from fulfilling it."</strong></em></font></big></p>
<p><big><font style="FONT-SIZE: 0.8em">We can ask ourselves: What is my unique <a href="http://www.personal.psu.edu/lrm155/blogs/technical_writing/4418105917_32b64cd467_b.jpg"><img style="MARGIN: 0px 0px 20px 20px; FLOAT: right" class="mt-image-right" alt="4418105917_32b64cd467_b.jpg" src="http://www.personal.psu.edu/lrm155/blogs/technical_writing/assets_c/2011/11/4418105917_32b64cd467_b-thumb-200x301-257430.jpg" height="301" width="200" /></a>purpose?&nbsp; What kind of person do I want to be?&nbsp; What kind of "personal brand" would I like to create for myself?&nbsp; What am I good at?&nbsp; What makes me different?</font></big></p>
<p><big><font style="FONT-SIZE: 0.8em">When I am old, what do I want people to say about me? </font></big></p>
<p><big><font style="FONT-SIZE: 0.8em"><strong>Personal mission statements are less about the things we want to do, and more about the kind of person we want to be. </strong></font></big></p>
<p><big><font style="FONT-SIZE: 1em"><strong>Think Different.&nbsp; Be Different.</strong></font></big></p>
<p><big><font style="FONT-SIZE: 0.8em"><font style="FONT-SIZE: 1.25em">S</font><font style="FONT-SIZE: 0.8em"><font style="FONT-SIZE: 1.25em">ometimes when we write personal mission statements we veer too close to cliche.&nbsp; Cliches are those statements that people repeat over and over, causing them to lose any real meaning</font>. </font></font></big></p>
<p><big><font style="FONT-SIZE: 0.8em">Plus, cliches are boring and unimaginative.&nbsp; Here are some common cliches:</font></big></p>
<p><big><font style="FONT-SIZE: 0.8em">I want to be happy.</font></big></p>
<p><big><font style="FONT-SIZE: 0.8em">I want to make a difference.</font></big></p>
<p><big><font style="FONT-SIZE: 0.8em">I love people.</font></big></p>
<p><big><font style="FONT-SIZE: 0.8em">I want to be a leader.</font></big></p>
<p><big><font style="FONT-SIZE: 0.8em">I value family and friends.</font></big></p>
<p><big><font style="FONT-SIZE: 0.8em">I want to live life to the fullest.</font></big></p>
<p><big><font style="FONT-SIZE: 0.8em">How do we avoid cliches? By being very specific.&nbsp; By thinking hard about what is really different about ourselves.&nbsp; And <a href="http://www.personal.psu.edu/lrm155/blogs/technical_writing/2012/11/how-to-write-with-flair.html">by writing with flair</a>.</font></big></p>
<p><font style="font-size: 0.8em;"><big><font size="2"><font style="font-size: 0.8em;">Image Source: Flickr</font>. </font><a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/mait/4418105917/"><font style="FONT-SIZE: 0.8em" size="2">Morning Cigarette</font></a><font style="FONT-SIZE: 0.8em" size="2">.</font></big></font></p>
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            <title>How To Write With Flair</title>
            <description><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://www.personal.psu.edu/lrm155/blogs/technical_writing/5295817405_c5ff058f5e_z.jpg"><img style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN: 0px auto 20px; DISPLAY: block" class="mt-image-center" alt="5295817405_c5ff058f5e_z.jpg" src="http://www.personal.psu.edu/lrm155/blogs/technical_writing/assets_c/2012/04/5295817405_c5ff058f5e_z-thumb-525x424-307260.jpg" height="424" width="525" /></a>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<font style="FONT-SIZE: 0.8em" size="2">&nbsp;Image Source: Flickr. Let It Snow...typefaces.</font><a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/tsevis/5295817405/sizes/z/in/photostream/"><font style="FONT-SIZE: 0.8em" size="2"> tsevis</font></a><font style="FONT-SIZE: 0.8em" size="2">.</font></p>
<p>Heather Holleman, Ph.D, is a successful author, blogger and Penn State writing instructor.&nbsp; Here is what she says is the key to successful writing - writing with flair.&nbsp; </p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class="MsoNormal" align="center"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Calibri', 'sans-serif'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><font size="3"><font color="#000000"><font face="Calibri">Five Ways to Write with Flair<o:p></o:p></font></font></font></span></b></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class="MsoNormal" align="center"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Calibri', 'sans-serif'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><font size="3"><font color="#000000"><font face="Calibri">By Heather Holleman, Ph.D.<o:p></o:p></font></font></font></span></b></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Calibri', 'sans-serif'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><o:p><font color="#000000" face="Calibri" size="3">&nbsp;</font></o:p></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Calibri', 'sans-serif'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><font size="3"><font color="#000000"><font face="Calibri">Most of us will have <i>thousands</i> of occasions for writing in the next year: emails, text messages, resumes, blog entries, cover letters, articles, love letters, essays, reports, memos, or our next big novel. How do we make our writing interesting to our audience? With flair!<br /><br />It's easy. I know 5 tricks. Ready?<br /><br />1.<b> Choose a verb with flair.</b> Eliminate feeble verbs (am, is, are, was, were, has, have, had, seems, appear, exists). These verbs don't show anything happening. Use exciting verbs. I love verbs like grapple and fritter. <i>Grapple with strong verbs to fritter away the feeble ones. </i><br /><br />2. <b>Toggle between the Big 5 punctuation marks:</b> When you want to create complexity and voice in your writing, try using the Big 5: semicolon, colon, dash, parentheses, comma.<o:p></o:p></font></font></font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Calibri', 'sans-serif'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><o:p><font color="#000000" face="Calibri" size="3">&nbsp;</font></o:p></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Calibri', 'sans-serif'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><font size="3"><font color="#000000"><font face="Calibri">Here's how:<o:p></o:p></font></font></font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Calibri', 'sans-serif'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><o:p><font color="#000000" face="Calibri" size="3">&nbsp;</font></o:p></span></p>
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<li style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt; mso-list: l0 level1 lfo1" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Calibri', 'sans-serif'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><font size="3"><font color="#000000"><font face="Calibri">To highlight a part of your sentence--like this one--use <b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal">dashes</b>. Dashes shout. On the other hand, if you want to whisper and share a secret with an audience (like this one), use <b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal">parentheses</b>. Parentheses whisper. <o:p></o:p></font></font></font></span></li></ul>
<p style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Calibri', 'sans-serif'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><o:p><font color="#000000" face="Calibri" size="3">&nbsp;</font></o:p></span></p>
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<li style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt; mso-list: l0 level1 lfo1" class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><font color="#000000"><font face="Calibri"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Calibri', 'sans-serif'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">Semicolons</span></b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Calibri', 'sans-serif'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"> confuse most; they unite full sentences that belong together because the second sentence explains or amplifies the first. <o:p></o:p></span></font></font></font></li></ul>
<p style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Calibri', 'sans-serif'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><o:p><font color="#000000" face="Calibri" size="3">&nbsp;</font></o:p></span></p>
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<li style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt; mso-list: l0 level1 lfo1" class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><font color="#000000"><font face="Calibri"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Calibri', 'sans-serif'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">Commas</span></b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Calibri', 'sans-serif'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"> help the reader along by following introductory clauses, or they combine two sentences when you want to use a conjunction like and, but, for, or, nor, so (commas can be really hard unless you had grammar instruction as a kid). <o:p></o:p></span></font></font></font></li></ul>
<p style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Calibri', 'sans-serif'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><o:p><font color="#000000" face="Calibri" size="3">&nbsp;</font></o:p></span></p>
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<li style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt; mso-list: l0 level1 lfo1" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Calibri', 'sans-serif'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><font size="3"><font color="#000000"><font face="Calibri">Finally, the <b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal">colon</b> designates that a list or definition will follow. So the Big 5 include: semicolon, colon, dash, parentheses, comma. <o:p></o:p></font></font></font></span></li></ul>
<p style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Calibri', 'sans-serif'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><o:p><font color="#000000" face="Calibri" size="3">&nbsp;</font></o:p></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Calibri', 'sans-serif'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><font size="3"><font color="#000000"><font face="Calibri">Do you feel smart? <br /><br />3. <b>Vary the length of your sentences and change the way they start to create rhythm.</b> See sample paragraph above. <br /><br />4. <b>Garnish your paragraph with some clever wordplay if you can.</b> Common cleverness in writing includes: puns, repeated first words, self-answering questions, understatement, just being funny, just being YOU. However, avoid overused expressions and clichés.<br /><br />5. <b>Engage your audience.</b> Establish rapport by talking to them. Are you wondering how this works? Just notice them in your writing (like I just did). Make it obvious that you are talking to people. <br /><br />Try these simple things to create some flair in your writing today. Enjoy some <i>written</i> flair. <o:p></o:p></font></font></font></span></p>]]></description>
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 cloud computing, remixing and technology that enables us to copy and transmit electronically. <br /><br /><b>Your Assignment: </b>Watch the above video and check out the above websites and links.&nbsp; Then read a recent news article about copyright issues and comment below.&nbsp; I am interested in <i><b>your response</b></i> - introduce the part of the article that seemed interesting to you and state your reaction.&nbsp; (Here are two articles: one about <a href="http://www.cnn.com/2012/10/26/justice/court-student-copyright/index.html">a student who resold textbooks</a> and another about <a href="http://www.cnn.com/2012/02/17/justice/megaupload-com-indictment/index.html">MegaUpload</a> - read these and/or find your own).&nbsp;&nbsp; <br /><br />Please complete this assignment by Monday, Nov. 26. <br />]]></description>
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<p>As some of us have learned already, Angel has fairly restrictive size limitations for uploaded files.&nbsp; Since our Technical Definition and Description documents are image-heavy (and should be), some of us are bumping into those limits. </p>
<p>If Angel tells you your Technical Definition and Description is too large, try any or all of the following:</p>
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<li><em>Convert pictures to JPGs.</em></li>
<li><em>Compress pictures in Word</em>.&nbsp; On a PC, this is as simple as right-clicking the image, clicking Format Pictures, then Compress.&nbsp; If you know how to do this on&nbsp;a Mac, please comment below.</li>
<li><em>Save entire document as a PDF</em>.&nbsp;&nbsp;I can't comment on PDFs, but&nbsp;you can always bring your document to me for verbal comment.&nbsp; </li>
<li><em>Upload your document to Dropbox.com, then post a link in the Angel dropbox.&nbsp;</em> This tool is the best (free)&nbsp;large-file uploader I have found.&nbsp; Again, if you know of a better one, please comment. </li></ul>
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<p>As useful and necessary as graphics are, it is not enough to just plop them into a document.&nbsp; Here are the steps you must take to correctly incorporate a graphic into your work.</p>
<p><strong>Step 1: <em>Label, number and title every graphic</em></strong>.&nbsp; In technical writing, all graphics are&nbsp;either <em>Tables </em>or <em>Figures.&nbsp;&nbsp;</em>Use <em>Tables </em>for tables (duh) and use<em> Figures </em>for everything else.&nbsp;The&nbsp;graphics should be numbered according to when they appear in your document (Figure 1, Figure 2 - or Table 1, 2 etc.).&nbsp; Also,&nbsp;every graphic should have&nbsp;an <em>informative title </em>that helps the reader understand the content.&nbsp; </p>
<p><strong>Step 2: <em>Place the graphic in the right spot.</em></strong>&nbsp; Usually, this means as close as possible to the text that refers to it.&nbsp; If the graphic is&nbsp;not <em>directly </em>relevant<em>,</em> or if the graphic is so large that it interrupts the flow of your document, place it in the appendix (and reference it in the text).</p>
<p><strong>Step 3: <em>Introduce and explain every graphic</em></strong>.&nbsp; Don't force your reader to do&nbsp;the interpretive work - explain what your graphic is doing and what the content&nbsp;means.&nbsp; Use legends, arrows, captions - anything that will help your reader understand.&nbsp; Also reference every graphic in the text - either <strong><em>before</em></strong> the graphic appears or, if you are wrapping text, <strong><em>next to&nbsp;</em></strong>the graphic.&nbsp; Avoid referencing a&nbsp;graphic for the first time <em>after</em> the graphic has already appeared. </p>
<p><strong>Step 4: <em>Document your graphics</em></strong>.&nbsp; If you didn't create the graphic yourself (and your company doesn't already own it), be sure cite the source.&nbsp; If you are publishing your work and the graphic is protected by copyright,&nbsp;you will&nbsp;have to get permission and possibly pay a fee.&nbsp; Most style guides recommend you&nbsp;cite the source in both a references section&nbsp;and in the caption of the graphic itself.&nbsp; &nbsp; </p>
<p><strong>Step 4: <em>Make your graphic stand out</em></strong>.&nbsp; Most graphics stand out anyway, but consider adding rules or boxes or additional spaces to distinguish your graphic from the text.&nbsp; If you are writing a document with several&nbsp;types of graphics, consider using colored screens or filters to separate the, say, marginal glosses&nbsp;from the charts and graphs.</p>
<p><strong>Step 5:&nbsp; <em>Make it easy to find your graphics</em></strong>.&nbsp; If your document includes 4 or more graphics, include&nbsp;a <em>list of illustrations </em>just after your table of contents.&nbsp; </p>
<p>See the&nbsp; <a href="http://www.personal.psu.edu/lrm155/blogs/technical_writing/2011%20Credit%20Suisse%20Report%20on%20Global%20Wealth.pdf">2011 Credit Suisse Report on Global Wealth.pdf</a>&nbsp;which&nbsp;illustrates almost perfectly how to incorporate charts and graphs.&nbsp; It also includes some pretty awesome visuals.</p>
<p>There are a couple of things this report does that we try to avoid, like right-justification and&nbsp;indented paragraphs.&nbsp; These "infractions" probably&nbsp;occurred because the document was likely&nbsp;published in print format.&nbsp;&nbsp;</p>
<p>I also noticed that, once,&nbsp;a visual was introduced after the visual occurred - a no-no, most of the time.&nbsp; Of course, this also&nbsp;illustrates the importance of referring to visuals by their labels - saying "See Figure 1" instead of "See figure below" - because sometimes we are just at the mercy of publishing and layout restrictions.</p>
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<p><strong>Marshall Loves&nbsp;Data Visualizations</strong>.&nbsp; </p>
<p>And who can blame him?&nbsp; </p>
<p>Studies repeatedly point to&nbsp;the importance of data visualization in helping us understand and remember information.&nbsp; Think of your own experience - have you ever tried to understand a difficult concept without the use of a visual?&nbsp; Have there been times when a visual was essential to your understanding of the information?&nbsp; </p>
<p>Can you think of an instance where you remembered a concept or idea <em>because</em> of the visual that accompanied it? </p>
<p>Not only does data visualization aid in understanding and remembering, but most of us&nbsp;just like visuals&nbsp;over text alone - kind of like Marshall.</p>
<p><strong>The Power of the Visual</strong></p>
<p>Check out this short video by Column Five on the power of data visualization.&nbsp; It shows how simple techniques, like the use of color, orientation and animation can make data pop.</p><iframe src="http://player.vimeo.com/video/29684853?title=0&amp;byline=0&amp;portrait=0" allowfullscreen="" mozallowfullscreen="" webkitallowfullscreen="" frameborder="0" height="225" width="400"></iframe>
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<p>You may not have thought much about typography before, but consider how fonts can carry certain connotations that can help reinforce (or contradict) your visual argument. </p>
<p>And yes, you are making <em>visual arguments</em>, <a href="http://www.personal.psu.edu/lrm155/blogs/technical_writing/arial.png"></a><a href="http://www.personal.psu.edu/lrm155/blogs/technical_writing/arial.JPG"><img style="MARGIN: 0px 0px 20px 20px; WIDTH: 256px; FLOAT: right; HEIGHT: 294px" class="mt-image-right" alt="arial.JPG" src="http://www.personal.psu.edu/lrm155/blogs/technical_writing/assets_c/2012/02/arial-thumb-275x306-292662.jpg" width="275" height="306" /></a>even if your text doesn't technically include a "visual."</p>
<p><strong>Font Attitude</strong></p>
<p>Fonts have "personalities."&nbsp; These personalities can help reinforce the message you are sending.</p>
<p>Font choices can help increase your ethos as a professional, serious student, or as a fun-loving artsy type, depending on the image you want to project.</p>
<p>Font choices can also increase the ethos of the technical document you are writing.&nbsp; Font choices should be considered along with all the other discourse choices you make, like&nbsp;organization, design, color, etc., according to your audience and purpose. </p>
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<p><strong><a href="http://www.personal.psu.edu/lrm155/blogs/technical_writing/sheriff.jpg"><img style="MARGIN: 0px 20px 20px 0px; WIDTH: 258px; FLOAT: left; HEIGHT: 263px" class="mt-image-left" alt="sheriff.jpg" src="http://www.personal.psu.edu/lrm155/blogs/technical_writing/assets_c/2012/02/sheriff-thumb-275x275-292664.jpg" width="275" height="275" /></a>The Sinister Side</strong></p>
<p>But beware: font personalities that are incongruous with your message can obscure your message and destroy your ethos.&nbsp; </p>
<p>Some fonts, regardless of the context, have developed bad reputations.&nbsp; Comic Sans, for instance, seems to consistently appear on many<a href="http://www.heyokadesign.com/news.asp?post=top-ten-worst-font-choices"> worst fonts lists</a>. </p>
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<p><a href="http://www.collegehumor.com/">College Humor </a>has produces a couple of videos that illustrate the personalities that come with some fonts:&nbsp;</p>
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<p>Have you ever made a mistake in a job interview?&nbsp; Said something you wish you could take back?&nbsp; Answered a question, well,&nbsp;<em>wrong</em>?&nbsp; </p>
<p><strong>Oops!</strong></p>
<p>Happens all the time.&nbsp; But, according to Beth Braccio Hering,<a href="http://msn.careerbuilder.com/Article/MSN-2758-Interviewing-Recovering-from-a-big-interview-mistake/">&nbsp;there are things you can do </a>to&nbsp;recover from embarrassing mistakes, including apologizing and avoiding the deer-in-the-headlights paralysis that can happen when&nbsp;you've said the wrong thing.&nbsp;&nbsp; </p>
<p>But what if&nbsp;you don't realize the mistake till after the interview is over?&nbsp; That's when she&nbsp;says you can&nbsp;use&nbsp;your thank you or follow-up message.&nbsp; If the mistake&nbsp;is fairly serious (no need to bring up&nbsp;a minor mistake that the interviewer may have missed anyway)&nbsp;you can try to correct the error - but use positive language.&nbsp; There's no need to simply remind your interviewer of the problem. </p>
<p><strong>Adding Value</strong></p>
<p>Of course, the best thank yous are ones where you don't have to apologize.&nbsp; Thank you messages should be timely&nbsp;(within 48 hours) and polite - and should be sent even for interviews that may not have gone so well.&nbsp; According to<a href="http://www.donstraits.com/"> Don Straits</a>, CEO and Dragonslayer of Corporate Warriors, the <a href="http://www.theladders.com/career-advice/interview-was-awesome-now-what">BEST thank you messages </a>are also <a href="http://www.theladders.com/career-advice/interview-was-awesome-now-what">value-added</a>:&nbsp; that is, they add something<strong> unique&nbsp;</strong>to the&nbsp;conversation, expanding on a topic that was mentioned during the interview.&nbsp;&nbsp;</p>
<p>Value-added thank yous are the way to go.&nbsp; But if you find yourself in a situation where you want to salvage an interview&nbsp;after it's over, consider thanking the interviewer and correcting the mistake at the same time.&nbsp; </p>
<p>There are no guarantees when it comes to interviewing and followup messages, but leaving a positive impression is always a good idea.&nbsp;&nbsp;</p>]]></description>
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<p><strong>LOL</strong></p>
<p>According <a href="http://finance.yahoo.com/news/tenacious-summer-analyst-applicant-got-laughed-at-by-everyone-else-on-wall-street.html">to an article </a>published by <a href="http://www.businessinsider.com/">Business Insider</a>, a super-ambitious summer analyst applicant has some of the biggest names on Wall Street in stitches.&nbsp; And not in a good way. </p>
<p>In his cover letter to Bank of America Merrill Lynch, he wrote (in part):</p>
<p>"I am unequivocally the most unflaggingly hard worker I know, and I love self-improvement. I have always felt that my time should be spent wisely, so I continuously challenge myself ... I decided to redouble my effort by placing out of two classes, taking two honors classes, and holding two part-time jobs. That semester I achieved a 3.93, and in the same time I managed to bench double my bodyweight and do 35 pull-ups."<br /></p>
<p><strong>A Challenge</strong></p>
<p>The hiring director&nbsp;sent the cover letter to Morgan Stanley, PricewaterhouseCoopers, Goldman Sachs, Wells Fargo and more.&nbsp; He offered to buy drinks&nbsp;for "the first analyst to concisely summarize everything that is wrong with" the note.</p>
<p>I'm willing to offer PRB comment credit&nbsp;for the same.&nbsp; <a href="http://finance.yahoo.com/news/tenacious-summer-analyst-applicant-got-laughed-at-by-everyone-else-on-wall-street.html">Click here </a>to see the entire cover letter.&nbsp; On your mark, get set, GO!</p>
<p><font style="FONT-SIZE: 0.8em">Thanks to Sidra Maryam who brought the&nbsp;article to my attention.</font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-SIZE: 0.8em" size="2">Image Source: Flickr.&nbsp;by </font><a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/ahdchild/5616723216/sizes/z/in/photostream/"><font style="FONT-SIZE: 0.8em" size="2">Ahd Photography</font></a></p>
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<p><strong><font style="FONT-SIZE: 1.25em" size="4">Or, "How to get someone to read my work when they may not want to."<br /><br /></font></strong>As you write your blog entries and consider new text for your e-portfolio, keep these facts in mind.&nbsp; <br /><br />&nbsp;<font style="FONT-SIZE: 1.25em"><b>People don't like to read entire documents on the Internet. </b></font><br />&nbsp;Wonder why?&nbsp; Most of the time, we use the Internet for bits of information or entertainment.&nbsp;&nbsp; If we can't find that information quickly and easily, we move on.&nbsp;&nbsp; There's so much more there.<br /><br /><font style="FONT-SIZE: 1.25em"><b><a onclick="window.open('http://www.personal.psu.edu/lrm155/blogs/technical_writing/assets_c/2011/09/martin gommel-244849.html','popup','width=500,height=500,scrollbars=no,resizable=no,toolbar=no,directories=no,location=no,menubar=no,status=no,left=0,top=0'); return false" href="http://www.personal.psu.edu/lrm155/blogs/technical_writing/assets_c/2011/09/martin%20gommel-244849.html"></a><a onclick="window.open('http://www.personal.psu.edu/lrm155/blogs/technical_writing/assets_c/2011/09/martin gommel-244849.html','popup','width=500,height=500,scrollbars=no,resizable=no,toolbar=no,directories=no,location=no,menubar=no,status=no,left=0,top=0'); return false" href="http://www.personal.psu.edu/lrm155/blogs/technical_writing/assets_c/2011/09/martin%20gommel-244849.html"></a>Medium over Message?</b></font><br />Make the <b>appearance</b> of your entries as interesting and inviting as the content of your entries.&nbsp; In fact, how your e-portfolio <i>looks </i>may be more important, at least initially, than what you have to say.&nbsp; <br /><br />Think about it.&nbsp; If you are reading on the Internet, and are faced with a text that is one long paragraph, in a hard-to-read font, how much time will you spend trying to decipher what it says? Thought so.<br /><br /><font style="FONT-SIZE: 1.25em"><b>So How Do I Get People to Read My Stuff?</b></font>&nbsp; <br />Here's how you make your entries inviting and&nbsp;increase the chance others will read them: <br /><br /><b>Keep Paragraphs Short.</b><br />For your blog entries, 25-35 words should do it.&nbsp; For additional impact, use a one sentence paragraph every now and then.&nbsp; As more and more people use the Internet for work and other purposes, paragraphs are getting longer but keeping them short is still a good general rule.<br /><br /><b>Use Headings, Bullets, Boldings.</b><br />Headings are wonderful things.&nbsp; They break up text and signal a hierarchy of information, which will increase readability for your readers.&nbsp;&nbsp; But they ALSO help YOU, as a writer, because they facilitate a logical organization of your text. <br /><br /><b>Take Advantage of the Medium</b><br />Link out to sources instead of adding information.&nbsp; This allows readers to choose what they are interested in and also builds trust, portraying you as someone who has done your research<br /><br />And don't forget your visuals!&nbsp; The Internet is a very visual medium.&nbsp; Plus people like pictures!&nbsp; Include pix, charts, graphs and videos. <br /><br /><b>Make Big Points First</b></p>
<p>Think <em>"upside-down triangle."&nbsp; </em>State answers before questions, summary before details, conclusions before discussion.&nbsp;&nbsp;This is also called the "direct approach," and it works very well with&nbsp;online blog writing. &nbsp;</p>
<p><strong>"It's Just You and Me, Kid"</strong><br />Talk to your reader.&nbsp; Use <i>you </i>and <i>we</i> to form a connection.&nbsp; No need to get too formal here. <br /><br />Check out this article by CopyBlogger on the <a href="http://www.copyblogger.com/art-of-the-paragraph/"><font color="#ae1b13">Art of the Paragraph</font></a>.&nbsp; It not only gives some excellent information on how to write rockin' paragraphs (ones that people will<i> want</i> to read) it also models all the information mentioned here about how to write for the Internet:&nbsp; <a href="http://www.personal.psu.edu/lrm155/blogs/ho/honorsrhetoric/Writing%20for%20the%20Internet.doc"><font color="#ae1b13">Writing for the Internet.doc</font></a><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /></p>]]></description>
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            <description><![CDATA[<p><big>Fair or not, a <strong>SINGLE ERROR </strong>on a resume can turn off an employer. Kind of like a stain on your shirt:</big></p>
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            <description><![CDATA[<p>Watch as Ed Helms builds his "job search skills:"</p>
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            <description><![CDATA[<p>Karen Henry, Editor in Chief at Bedford/St. Martins (the publisher of Markel's <em>Technical Communication</em> e-book and website) offers the following tech support:</p>
<p><strong>We want to make sure that students and instructors using our technology (from free sites like Exercise Central to e-books like Mike Markel's Technical Communication) have a good experience... please feel free to call or e-mail me if there are any questions or issues.&nbsp; </strong></p>
<p><strong>Of course the first place to call&nbsp; if there are technical problems is our tech support group (see below). It's best to call rather than e-mail, if you are trying to reach them during the hours noted below.&nbsp;&nbsp; </strong></p>
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<p><strong>If you have any questions about registering, purchasing, logging in or using our technological supplements, call toll free 1-800-936-6899 . Hours are from 9:00 AM - 3:00 AM Monday-Thursday, Friday 9:00 AM - 11:00 PM, Saturday 11:30 AM - 8:00 PM and Sunday 11:30 AM - 11:00 PM EST, or email us at </strong><a href="mailto:techsupport@bfwpub.com"><strong>techsupport@bfwpub.com</strong></a></p>
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            <description><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://www.personal.psu.edu/lrm155/blogs/technical_writing/5311486823_a9bb83776e.jpg"></a><a href="http://www.personal.psu.edu/lrm155/blogs/technical_writing/assets_c/2011/08/5311486823_a9bb83776e-thumb-250x333-240982.jpg"><img style="MARGIN: 0px 20px 20px 0px; FLOAT: left" class="mt-image-left" alt="Thumbnail image for 5311486823_a9bb83776e.jpg" src="http://www.personal.psu.edu/lrm155/blogs/technical_writing/assets_c/2011/08/5311486823_a9bb83776e-thumb-250x333-240982-thumb-250x333-240984.jpg" width="250" height="333" /></a>As we move through the semester, you will want to check out this<strong> "What's&nbsp;New" page </strong>often (at least once a week)<a href="http://www.personal.psu.edu/lrm155/blogs/technical_writing/5311486823_a9bb83776e.jpg"></a>.&nbsp; </p>
<p>Here is where I will post announcements and updates.&nbsp;&nbsp;I&nbsp; will also occasionally write blog entries on subjects that are important to our class.&nbsp;&nbsp;</p>
<p>Sometimes I&nbsp;write&nbsp;"lesson" blogs on topics that will help us with our coursework.&nbsp;</p>
<p>And sometimes&nbsp;I post blogs on stuff that's happening in the world, especially if it relates to what we talk about in class.&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</p>
<p>Please, feel free to comment on anything I post.&nbsp; Some comments may count toward your PRB assignment (I'll let you know which ones.).&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</p>
<p>I'm looking forward to working with you!</p>]]></description>
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